Feedback From Rough Cut

After watching our rough cut, we asked fellow class mates of ours to write down what they thought of it.

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Catherine Long's Feeback







After reading the feedback from my friends the main concern was parts of the video being pixellated. We have now found out that is due to video needed to be rendered, which is what we will do when we finish the video. It is due to the size of the video. We also have decided after reading the feedback and looking at other music videos we would like to use a music channel logo on the video, to make it look more realistic. Because of this we will have to write to the company. We have choosen to use 'The Box' here is our letter to them:

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am an A level student at Wilmington Girls Grammar School and I am writing to request your permission to use your logo of The Box for our music video for the single “Wonderful Life” by The Hurts. With your permission, this logo would be used in my current A-level Media Studies project which involves creating an advertisement poster for a popular music track, as well as producing an album (Digipak) and a music video. If I received your permission, this logo would ONLY be used in an educational context and be viewed by my media class, my teacher and the OCR exam board moderator. It would NOT be released to a large audience. The artist and your company would of course be fully recognized throughout pre- production and the final production itself.

We hope to hear from you soon.
Thank you for your time.
Kathryn Sivers and Sophie Jones